Week 4 prelim crit notes

For my case study I was told to make sure that the monkey bars in the illustration were clearly cylindrical making it easier to understand what they are. I was also advised for the layout of the document to make it landscape rather than portrait.

Week 2 sketches

Week 2 Peer Feedback

Is it an editorial?
Yes.

Is it accurate/thoughtful?
Yes.

What is worth refining?
No sketches.

Week 1 Inspiring Illustrators

James Jean
http://www.jamesjean.com/

Mark Brown
http://www.browntownstudios.com/gallery.php?pageNum_thumbs=0

Mu Pan
http://mupan.com/

Week 1 Editorial Analasys

Schools need to learn the importance of recess

What do you plan to do about transportation? #3 on page

E-cigarettes: Much safer than cigarettes, don’t tax them

 

Editorial Analysis

Schools need to learn the importance of recess

The article I chose argues against reducing recess times in schools. The main point is they have seen higher grade averages in schools with over 20 minutes of recess. The main players involved in the situation are the children attending schools. I was thinking I could represent the article with a silhouette of a kid sitting at a desk resting his head on his hand looking out a window at a playground.